Emotional

Today, a brother in the book group said that a few people have read several chapters.

All of a sudden, I got a feeling,

In fact, there are many book reviews that are similar, but I have never responded.

Let's talk about this today,

To be honest, if there is no water, a novel can be written in one sentence.

Any book is made up of countless stories.

A lot of background stories, characters, mental activities, the water you see,

In fact, readers don't know that your emotional mobilization depends entirely on these seemingly water parts.

It's like these four people I wrote recently, if I don't write about their characters and their background stories,

It's just a one-off, if the protagonist has recruited them all,

Then in the back, when they make some choices, do you think they are mentally retarded? Because you don't understand the character of this character and what happened to him at all, then if he makes some choices and disagrees with you, you will think that he is a brain-dead.

And would you read such a book?

Besides Jiang Yanhai and Li Ruobai,

I'm not good at love stories, but I have to set the stage for what they need. Otherwise, if their relationship is all passed away, then if one day later, if Li Ruobai wants to block the bullet for Jiang Yanhai, will you? You will feel that it is too fake, without any emotional foundation, why would you give your life for him? (No spoilers, just an example)

In many novels, some people will cry, laugh, and have emotions, and these emotions are the sense of substitution. How does the sense of substitution come from? In fact, it is composed of many stories that you look like water, but actually subtly affect your emotions.

Just say Ivan, if I don't write his experience, don't write his story, just say that the protagonist saved him and saved him back to the country, and then he would work hard in the country and contribute to the country, would you not? Will you call me too fake?

But you have to combine Ivan's experience. To be honest, if anyone is treated like this in the end, he will work hard and cherish this opportunity.

It's like, the recent air combat incident, some brothers said, paving the way for 10 chapters and air combat 3 chapters.

In fact, if you don't have the 10 chapters that pave the way, you will have no pleasure reading those 3 chapters.

I am an author and a reader. As a reader, my personal understanding of water means that the protagonist pretends to be a B, and then the onlookers can be shocked, discuss, and analyze the eight or nine chapters that are called water.

Bystanders are a necessary product, but a reasonable number is normal. If there are too many, it will appear excessive.

Of course, I'm not saying that the book I write is perfect, or that it's the most correct way to write it. In fact, there are a lot of people who criticize me in the book review area.

All I can say is that I am studying hard, and what I have written is the highest level I can write at my current level.

I can write better, and I want to write better, but my current ability is limited, so I can only improve a little bit and learn a little bit.

Of course, I don't despise you for scolding me for water. Those who can scold me here are all genuine. I thank my brothers.

I just feel it, just chat.

The so-called high C means that there are lows before highs. The so-called first depression and then rising, there are no lows, and the whole process is high energy, which is not called high energy.

Finally, thanks again, all the brothers who support the genuine, subscribe to the genuine, reward and vote!

That's it, I'm off to code. Everyone, vote monthly.