Summary of Volume 1
Let me briefly talk about the changes:
The first change: Chapter 3
Before publishing the book, my original Chapter 3 was to be the continuation of Chapter 8, but the day before publishing the book, I felt that such a story seemed a bit bland, so I added the conflict with the William Pirates.
Because it was written temporarily, I wanted to use the Jedi counterattack to create a sense of excitement, but when I looked back a few days ago, I found that there were some contradictions with the first two chapters.
Now it has been revised, and the protagonist is the pirate Atton who was easily solved.
The second change: Ghost Ship
The Ghost Ship is the first climax of the book, summoning the Grand Knight Commander [Lanros]!
Major Kahn blocked the knife for the protagonist, which was the plot I expected, but because I was outside at the time, I didn’t write it well. I went back to revise it when I was more than 40 chapters, and I caught a cold because of staying up late to revise it.
I also asked myself, is it necessary to revise here? Later, I was determined, because if it helps to shape and connect the protagonist, then it must be revised.
The third modification: [Fishman Pirates]
The shadow soldiers I designed are not afraid of sea water, retain their abilities before death, and fishman soldiers can go to sea. Because a reader criticized that it should not be so against the will of heaven, I was affected at that time and deleted this setting.
But I thought about it yesterday. I am the author of this book. How to write the book should be based on my own ideas and routes, rather than readers guiding me to write it, otherwise what will everyone read?
Now I return to my own settings. Shadow soldiers are not afraid of sea water, and fishman soldiers have their abilities before death and can go to sea.
Kuzan uses the freezing ability to ride a bicycle on the sea. The protagonist can also move on the sea by stepping on [Along]. The devil fruit is just that the ability user is afraid of sea water.
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After the modification, let's make a summary
The first volume "Marine Major", or it can be said that the East China Sea chapter has been written. It took more than a month and a few days to publish the book, with a total of 160,000 words.
After writing the first volume of the Navy Major, I felt relaxed. The ending was very good. The scene freezes in line with the scene in my mind and coincides with the title of the volume.
The "Marine Major" in this volume represents two meanings, one is Major Kahn, and the other is the protagonist who has grown from a recruit.
Looking back on this volume, I have made a lot of changes due to my lack of writing skills and some other reasons, but now it is perfect and basically has no problems.
After the protagonist joined the navy training, in order to avoid boring everyone, I tried to reduce some plots and speed up the pace.
The real take-off was at the end of the recruit period, starting from Chapter 26.
Later, I began to shape the protagonist's family, and then began to contact the original characters reasonably and smoothly. Although it was a bit slow, it was not abrupt.
After all, I am not an old author, and my writing skills are really not that good. I can't write battles and daily life very well. I can only say that I tried my best to write.
Here, I would like to thank the reader nicknamed "leolin6414" on Qidian. He kept helping me pick out typos when he read. Because I used a mobile phone to type, I checked and modified after writing, and sometimes I always missed a few. Please forgive me.
By the way, let me talk about the important prototypes of the characters borrowed in the first volume, although there are not many.
Protagonist: Coles
The "summoning shadow" gold finger ability is borrowed from the Korean comic "I level up alone", which I have already said in the author's words in Chapter 2.
Sister: Vilshia
The prototype comes from "Violet Evergarden", Violet, with the same golden hair and blue eyes. In this book, she is not miserable, she is unrestrained, and has all kinds of love from her family.
From the appetite of the pirate world, her talent is very high, but I will not write a plot about the sister fighting. The difficulties and obstacles in the future will be solved by the protagonist alone.
[Lancelot]:
The prototype is borrowed from Lancelot, the Knight of the Round Table. I also designed a sad story in the text, and arranged the demon sword reasonably.
William: The prototype is borrowed from the protagonist of the book "Pirate Code", Sauna King...
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I have designed the development of the protagonist's fruit ability. Donghai only needs to be simple and rough. I will show them one by one later.
Of course, everyone knows that I am not good at naming. I will go to the comment area to build a collection of fruit abilities and swordsmanship moves. If you have any ideas, you can mention them.
After finishing the first volume, I finally waited for the first recommendation from Qidian yesterday...
Now the recommendation depends on following the reading, and I really have no choice. Please help to follow the reading these days, comment more, and be more active.
This book has 160,000 words, but the current data is still very poor. I really want to advance in the recommendation and go through a few more rounds of recommendations later to avoid the tragic situation of being put on the shelves, please!
The story of the next volume will unfold a more exciting and powerful story with the original characters.
At the same time, responding to what everyone wants to know, this book has a single female protagonist, and it will appear in the second volume.
This book is guaranteed to be updated twice a day, and I will stay up late to write more in the past few days. I hope everyone can help to follow the latest chapter within 24 hours.
I trouble all readers here.
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Volume 2: Showing off
The navy, pirates, and the revolutionary army, the thread of fate continues to intersect in him. Who can know which path Coles will eventually take?
The only thing that can be seen clearly now is a rising star in the navy.
Charlotte Coles!