1 some Important Notes
The previous chapter was rewritten, so you can take a look, you need to refresh to see it.
It was originally 6200 characters, but now it is 7142 characters. After deletion and addition, many contents have changed.
However, the gist has not changed.
Let me talk about the reason for the modification, mainly because of everyone's opinions on Yan Liuyuan's blackening.
Insomnia until now, I decided to re-examine this chapter, and then look at my own shortcomings.
The first thing I want to say is that I don’t agree with the word blackening, because like I said, every character in this book just has his own standpoint, and there is no way to distinguish good from evil intuitively.
So Yan Liuyuan didn't suddenly become a wicked devil, he just wanted to go his own way.
Secondly, let me summarize the shortcomings of the previous chapter here. Because of the rush to update, the foreshadowing was not done enough, and it was very ill-considered. When updating, I also faintly felt that something was almost there. It seemed that something should have happened but I didn’t. As if writing it out, I struggled for an hour.
So many times I will update around five o'clock in the afternoon, but after six o'clock yesterday, I had no choice but to update in the end.
I have to admit that foreshadowing is not enough.
So the direction of modification is mainly here.
On the one hand, the reason why Yan Liuyuan felt that he could no longer face Ren Xiaosu, or in other words, was not that he couldn't face Ren Xiaosu, but that he couldn't face his past self.
Just like what I posted on Weibo, "Many people will not be able to face their past selves when they grow up"
On the other hand, everyone has always been curious, what is the price of Yan Liuyuan's curse now?
I wanted to talk about this when he went back to the grassland to face Sister Xiaoyu, but I suddenly realized that it would be impossible not to talk about it here, so I also wrote it in the last chapter.
This is one of the reasons for the so-called "blackening".
On the other hand, the grassland needed him. When he was by Ren Xiaosu's side, he felt more like Ren Xiaosu's vassal. In the grassland, it was not he who needed others, but others who needed him.
That's why there are those words that Qiqige said.
So in my opinion, Yan Liuyuan made these choices because of a combination of reasons, not because of a specific reason.
But because the hasty update was not written, I can only refine it again. In the future, I may go back and refine it for the third time. Even after this book is finished, I will go back and refine it chapter by chapter until I am satisfied.
You can look back and come here to discuss.
I suffered from insomnia again today, and those few hours at night were very tormenting. I was really afraid that because the update volume had to be guaranteed, there would be regrets like the king again. This feeling is too sad for a storyteller.
Feel sorry.
Another thing is that the wall of rupture is not between Ren Xiaosu and Yan Liuyuan. It's not that I don't want to abuse you. The world is going to be analyzed, and they will not turn against each other. This is what I look at the two of them from an objective perspective, so there is no need to force blood.
There is no conflict of interest. If Yan Liuyuan really wanted to be the king of the world, what would Ren Xiaosu do according to his character? Ren Xiaosu has never been a person who kills relatives righteously, I think so.
The ending of this story has long been decided. A magnificent era should not be a one-man show for one or two people.
Finally, I would like to chat with you with a sincere attitude. I hope that if this situation occurs again in the future and I fail to update on time, everyone will be more tolerant.
After all, it hurts my heart to see everyone leave a message saying that I have not kept my word. I will try my best to do my best, at least the best within my ability.
thank you all.