Chapter 1467 Now It's Your Turn

"You and Suizi are discussing how to improve this article, and Xiaoping will help you fetch water and so on. You should be busy first, and I will leave first if I have something to do. After the correction is completed, just send it to me." Said Political commissar Wanning left and left the ward to them.

"Sister Suizi, I...I'll go and pour water for you first!" He Xiaoping took the thermos and left, looking into Shen Long's eyes, besides being grateful, there was also adoration.

"I don't know what's going on, I just... just want to remember something, I feel awkward looking at it myself, and I don't know what the political commissar is thinking." Shen Long said pretending to be innocent.

"In fact, writing is not as difficult as you think. The so-called writing comes from the heart. Writing out your true thoughts is writing." Xiao Suizi doesn't think so, she also thinks that Shen Long's writing has a kind of simple power , in fact, in the books she has read, there are many of you who write in this style.

For example, Zhao Shuli's writing is full of rustic flavor, while Wang Zengqi's naive writing gives people a special sense of beauty. This kind of writing is much more beautiful than those piled up with gorgeous rhetoric; The hands of a child, or the hands of a master who has reached the realm of returning to the original.

So she is not surprised that Shen Long can write such words, maybe only a simple person like Liu Feng can write such words; how did she know that Shen Long was a serious writer and won an international award , and has been a soldier for many years, it is not unusual to write this kind of article. Of course, those crooked characters and frequent typos are intentional. Does this conform to Liu Feng's true cultural level?

"Your articles speak your mind, which is very good." Xiao Suizi said sincerely, "I can't change much, that is, to help you correct typos, adjust the sentences a little, and then help you write The article is just transcribed on manuscript paper; oh yes, and the political commissar told me just now that you only wrote about us, why didn’t you write about yourself? Let me add some of your deeds to it.”

"What is there to write about what I did?" Shen Long showed a simple and honest smile again, scratching his head embarrassedly, "Besides, hasn't the superior already commended me?"

"If what you do is nothing, our little things are nothing." Xiao Suizi smiled, "What's more, you are a model soldier in our military region. If you don't have your name, the higher authorities will feel strange Woolen cloth."

She suddenly came up with an idea, "Why don't you do it this way, I'll revise it for you according to your article, and add your deeds at the end, and write it in my tone, so that it can appear more objective." She felt that it would be inappropriate for Liu Feng to write about Liu Feng's deeds by himself. It would be much better if he wrote in the tone of his comrades-in-arms.

"I don't understand either. You can write whatever you want." Shen Long secretly praised Xiao Suizi in his heart. He deserves to be someone who can rely on writing for a living in the future. This idea is really good.

After a while, He Xiaoping came back from fetching water, and poured water for Shen Long and Xiao Suizi in a hurry. This is what she learned from her mother since she was a child. Shen Long thanked her and asked her about her situation in the army.

"Sister Shuwen and Sister Suizi take care of them, and there are so many comrades-in-arms who help me improve. I think it's very good." He Xiaoping smiled sincerely. Compared with a family that feels depressed all the time, this place is simply too happy.

Although they encountered some problems these days, with Hao Shuwen covering her, He Xiaoping's life is still very good. Hao Shuwen has always been aggressive, but no one deliberately provokes He Xiaoping.

In fact, the person He Xiaoping is most grateful to, she is not ashamed to say,

She is not a fool, she also thought about it seriously when she was resting at night, if she hadn't been told by Shen Long along the way, she would definitely not have a good relationship with Hao Shuwen so soon after she came to the group, and naturally she wouldn't be able to integrate here so smoothly, girl She had already learned about those things in school.

Xiao Suizi's writing was really good, and he quickly helped Shen Long correct the article, and added a few stories about Liu Feng at the back. Shen Long scratched his head after reading it, "Oh, it's a bit too much, right? Less and less?" This is not an article that highlights myself, but promotes the entire collective, and my own article is too long to overwhelm the guest.

However, seeing Xiao Suizi remember so many things about Liu Feng, Shen Long was still very happy. It seemed that not everyone took Liu Feng's things for granted.

Xiao Suizi read it carefully, and also found this problem, "Hey, it's because you did too much for the regiment before; how about this, I'll delete all other deeds, and only leave you to help the regiment. The matter of carrying water for disabled people is good, and most of the deeds of other comrades-in-arms are internal, and a model of military and civilian family members is also needed."

She is also an expert, and when she thinks about it, she knows which deeds are the most bright and can be recognized by the superior unit, so the article revised by Xiao Suizi was quickly approved by the Ning Political Committee, and the names of Liu Feng and Xiao Suizi were signed and submitted to the military region. Propaganda Department there.

He had just gone to the capital to accept the commendation on behalf of the military region, and the name Liu Feng still had an impression in the minds of the staff of the propaganda department; in the words of later generations, he hadn't been trending yet, everyone must remember him.

So when they saw Liu Feng's name, the staff of the publicity department quickly paid attention to it, and after reading the article seriously, they all thought it was good, so they quickly handed the article to the leader for review, and the leader didn't hesitate to read it. I'm glad that the military is a place that emphasizes the collective. How can individual models be better than unit collective models?

So I immediately arranged for publication, and published this article in the next issue of the newspaper. The chief and the political commissar were happy now. This is our collective honor.

After getting the newspaper, the chief immediately called a meeting of the whole group to study the article seriously. Even Shen Long was invited here with illness. After the chief had someone read the article, he praised Shen Long and Xiao Suizi, and then decided to continue Carry forward this spirit and strive for higher honor.

For example, like what you did in the article, do you want to continue to do it in the future? The people in the audience were a little dazed and didn't realize the meaning of the chief's words, but Shen Long secretly laughed in his heart, which means Let you learn from Liu Feng and do more good deeds in the future.

You guys used to just sit there and watch Liu Feng do it, now it's your turn to do it, Shen Long doesn't believe it, after this article, the chief can let them throw everything on Shen Long.