1 Snack

In fact, I don't like to write single chapters very much. I have written them perfectly for so long, and I haven't posted many single chapters.

A reader friend in the group today said that many readers said that the progress of the plot was too slow. After chatting with everyone in the group, I felt that it is necessary to post a single chapter to talk about it.

In fact, the results of this book are very mediocre, and it has not yet entered the high-quality goods, that is, the average order is less than 3,000.

To be honest, I am quite disappointed myself, but I also know why.

Part of the reason is that when I was conceiving my new book, I pursued clues and logic too much, which led to the slow progress of the whole plot.

For example, when I came back from rebirth, I mentioned the matter of the garment factory. I planned to gradually expand this line into a business line, but it has been laid until now;

For example, the character Zhang Aixue was set up to help the protagonist in the education industry, and it was also laid out all the way;

For example, the character Lin Tianyi served the protagonist to go to university from the very beginning, because the protagonist basically did not have the possibility of passing the overseas exam when he came, and Yingzhou in the setting is a small city, and the school cannot have To be eligible to be recommended to China Overseas, if you want the protagonist to be specially recruited, you must let a big cow come here, see the ability of the protagonist, and then take the initiative to offer an olive branch.

However, it is unreasonable for a big bull to come to this small town all of a sudden, it feels like a golden finger from the sky, so he built a competitor, and through the competitor's death step by step, finally led the big bull here. Help the protagonist solve the problem of going to college.

But now it seems that it is not appropriate to think too much.

With my writing habit, if I think too much, it is easy to write very detailed and slow-paced.

If the pace is slow, the results will not be too good, and everyone will not buy it.

I really regret it.

I regret that I should have sped up the pace from the beginning and let the protagonist go to college.

Hey……

Posting a single chapter to complain, being scolded is my own problem, stand at attention to accept criticism, and at the same time reflect deeply, I will try to speed up the speed and progress recently!

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