Talk About Your Thoughts!

In the blink of an eye, this book has been officially on the shelves for two months. Tingyu has gained a lot in these two months, but there are also many shortcomings. I want to chat with you.

First of all, let me report the results. The first order for Arcane is 1,600, the current high order is 9,300, the average order is 4,200, and the follow-up order is 900.

No matter how you say it, as Tingyu's first novel to be published, this achievement is indeed very good. It has reached the level of quality, which is an achievement that I never dared to think of before.

I would like to express my gratitude to all readers, thank you for reading this book!

After talking about the achievements, the next step is the shortcomings.

First of all, since I made the recommendation, due to various reasons of Tingyu's own, the performance has been falling. The 900 follow-up order can be considered a collapse, and the average order has also dropped from the highest 4700 to 4200.

Because Tingyu was not in good condition after having a fever some time ago, and the update time was unstable. As a novice, maintaining stable updates for a long time is also a challenge for me. After all, Tingyu is not a very diligent person.

After talking about other situations, let’s return to this book. The book Arcana has condensed Tingyu’s hard work over the past few months. Tingyu is working hard to write this book.

The plot before it was released had many shortcomings. Everyone also gave Tingyu a lot of suggestions, which she accepted humbly. For example, the character description was monotonous and not full enough, the plot settings were old-fashioned, there were too many coincidences, and it was not reasonable enough.

Tingyu also paid attention to the subsequent plot settings. At the same time, he was also reading books by other big writers, especially "The Lord of Mysteries". Recently, he was studying the emphasis on environmental description, character psychological description and profile description. Of course, I was just studying. If I could have as much writing power as a squid, I think it would be enough.

After the update yesterday, because I was on duty at work and took the time to finish coding, I sent a message to the writer asking for a monthly pass or something. Unexpectedly, everyone reacted very strongly and gave Tingyu a lot of suggestions.

Hmm. To be honest, when the author saw a page of criticism in the backstage, Ting Yu’s mentality was a little broken. He even wrote some rubbish. Is he worthy of writing a book? A similar idea (laughs~)

I would like to thank the boss from the beginning of the legend. I couldn’t hold it in any longer this morning and reflected on it in the Q group. The boss comforted me and encouraged me, as well as the little red bag. I love it!

After thinking about it for a while, I suddenly felt

I am so hypocritical!

Readers are willing to spend real money to read their own books instead of pirated copies. Isn't it hypocritical to still complain and worry about it?

If you have this time, you might as well write more words!

I'm sorry dear readers, I will humbly accept your criticisms and work hard to correct them!

Then I went back to the book and briefly summarized it.

First, the recent slow progress and water problems of the main line do exist in this regard.

This is a matter of controlling the plot of Ting Yu. I always feel that entering the ruins directly would be too sudden and unreasonable. I always want to insert new storylines and slow down the pace. This is My question, I will pay attention to it later, pay attention to ensure the integration of main plot advancement and world view foreshadowing, and control myself.

Guys, please believe me, I really don’t do water just for water’s sake!

In terms of supplementing and describing the background of the novel, I think ArEmper is right in what he said in Chapter 197. The previous description of the world of Gaia was too thin and lacked depth. More words should be written in this aspect. I deeply agree.

Especially in Lord of Mysteries, through various simple descriptions of the environment, a profound and real world can be built between the lines, which is amazing.

I will work hard in this area in the future, such as the fullness of the protagonist's character and the description of the supporting characters.

Second, insufficient updates.

This problem is very serious, because Tingyu works part-time, so he can only code in his free time. Tingyu has no plans to code full-time in the future.

In the past two days, I have gone back and reviewed the previous plot. To be honest, I personally feel that Arcane is still a readable novel that I can barely read. The most important thing is that I have not updated it enough.

To use my reflection in Q group,

The biggest problem is that I update too little.

I also want to add to the worldview,

I also want the plot to be reasonable,

I also want to flesh out the image of the supporting role,

You really want to set up a foreshadowing,

Two chapters and four thousand words updated a day,

I'm thinking shit!

I will work hard. Starting from today, I will save my manuscripts and focus on coding!

I don’t dare to brag, but I guarantee there will be more updates than before!

I strive to show you a story about Li Si, a novel about the past that everyone can read after dinner!

Listen to the rain

Written late at night on Christmas Day 2023!