"Comments on the Completion of the Book" And "Receipt of Repentance"

Finished! Finished!

After persisting in writing for 536 days (four days of leave), this book is finally finished with 2.33 million words!

I feel that this ending is a perfect ending. Earth and Yangyue have resolved most of the conflicts, become friendly neighbors on the road of peaceful development, and embarked on a road full of hope.

And Ji Ming, the savior of the two worlds, also left, achieving the achievement of [There is no savior in this world, nor is there a fairy emperor].

As for the problem of the emotional line... wait for the extra chapters in the future, write an IF ending or something like that.

Since everyone has seen this, I believe that everyone should be able to perceive one thing, that is, my personal writing tendency.

I personally firmly believe in the two theories of "the most magical is reality" and "the most bizarre is reality", so this book is basically based on a "most perfect" logical foundation to tell a "most exaggerated" plot story.

The biggest example is that no force in this book is completely clean. Not to mention the so-called positive forces such as the Glorious Light and the Holy Light Church, even the Yangyue Foreign Affairs Bureau, I have hinted at some internal problems, such as the relationship between the people competing for credit.

I will continue to write like this in the future. After all, there is no cleanliness without filth. The meaning of the protagonist's existence is to blast through all these mouths!

Here are three things, divided into three points.

——Summary——

It's not easy. This is the first time in my life that I have written such a long novel.

So I am ashamed that this book must have made many mistakes in the writing process. It's still a favor for you to read all the way here.

How to say it, this book is a tiger's head and a snake's tail.

Snake's tail, because this book currently has 44,000 collections, but the average subscription is only more than 600, and the number of follow-up readers is only in the single digit, which is very miserable.

There is no way, I have to make a living, even the beginning of the second is almost gone, to some extent, this is also one of the reasons why the book will end here.

But here, I have already expressed everything I wanted to express, and the ending is explained. It can't be considered a bad ending!

Even if I continue to write, I will just fill the last part of the plot with details (water filling), and at most add a branch line of Ji Ming going to Lingxi.

Tiger head, because when I first started writing, I thought it would be good if the book could be put on the shelves with 5,000 copies, but the result was nearly 15,000.

It was originally possible to take off, not to mention that the tiger climbed the mountain hard and blasted out a masterpiece, at least give us a thousand averages!

It's a pity that because of the big failure of the second volume, the first subscription was 390, and the average subscription was less than 800 when it was written at the highest! It's a shame for this popular novel.

Or I am not capable enough, so I didn't have the face to contact the editor for a whole year last year, and I was busy writing books.

So since it's embarrassing, it means that there must be certain problems with this book, and I must write a "Crime Edict" here.

Let's follow Robinson's format and list all the strengths and weaknesses of this book that I think are there.

For myself, to be alert!

For everyone, to make up for it!

Then, the second point.

--Discussion of advantages and disadvantages --

[Biggest strength: nonsensical jokes]

I just like writing this, exaggerated contrast, outrageous writing, countless bad jokes, and classic inserted jokes.

I believe that people who are willing to read this book also like it, or at least can accept these elements.

Very good, then I will continue to carry forward in my next book!

[Biggest weakness: the fourth disaster]

I can tell you responsibly that if this book does not have the fourth disaster, it will follow the idea of ​​the first volume and only write about Ji Ming's outrageous adventure until here, and the results will definitely be better than now.

Because I can see from the background that the first round of big rhythm and the tide of quitting the pit of this book started from the beginning of the second volume. Many people cannot accept that Ji Ming temporarily retreats to the second line and lets the players play the leading role.

So I won't write about this in the next book. I'll just focus on writing outrageous adventures and let the protagonist take the spotlight!

[Second strength: the cooperative relationship between the protagonist and the plug-in]

The system is either a cold machine, or a traitor who backstabs the protagonist, or a mugwort... cough, but in this book, the system, or the small boss, is a separate character.

It is the protagonist's first ally and the most trustworthy friend. It also serves as the ring grandfather, the plot narrator, and the insert joke performance artist.

I personally like this positioning of the small boss. This thing really reduces the difficulty of my writing and also enhances the program effect at critical moments.

I should continue this setting in the next book, but the new small boss should not be so flying.

[Second weakness: plot arrangement]

In fact, the fourth disaster element itself is innocent, and this will become the biggest war criminal that caused the book to fail.

I remember that a reader asked me in the middle of the book if I had read any novels about the fourth disaster. I didn't dare to say anything at the time.

Now I'm going to reveal my true colors. Yes, I can say that I haven't read it ()

I just wanted to write about female brothers and something fun... so I arranged for the fourth disaster to appear.

As a result, Bai Yesheng failed to be portrayed and was hidden for a long time. The weakness of the fourth disaster was a heavy blow... Hey!

I don't know if you still remember that when I wrote the second volume, I almost split a day into day and night, and split the map into Sunshine City and Underground City, and wrote it day by day.

To be honest, looking back now, this is simply a disastrous setting.

Although I did write clearly about the players' initial development context and laid the main tone of "The Fourth Disaster Plan", the pace is too slow and too tiring.

Let alone two volumes, the third volume was just completed and the public beta was just launched. The time in the book is not even as fast as in reality. It's really funny.

Even if I speeded up later, by the time I finished the book, I only wrote from the winter of the first year to the winter of the third year, which was barely faster than reality.

The next book will definitely not be like this. The writing should be more concise and the plot should be more linear.

[Next strengths: The protagonist of the messenger of justice]

No mistakes in one book, one post, one content, one 6, one 9, one book, one forum!

Admit that I deliberately arranged a protagonist with a slightly twisted personality and behavior.

Ji Ming, a man who always does the softest things with the worst intentions.

For the "protagonist", this is definitely not as decisive as killing. I will chop off anyone who is not happy with me, and feel happy!

But for "everyone", Ji Ming is definitely a person who can be trusted to make friends.

Just like in this book, Ji Ming has never let down any good person or person who is good to him. As a savior, he has fulfilled all his duties.

I hope that after reading this book, everyone can remember Ji Ming, and remember that there was a book whose protagonist was an absolutely reliable good person.

Life is very tiring, but things are done right, and he is really running for all living beings, instead of cursing the sky and the earth at the beginning and being full of resentment, and finally becoming a king and a ancestor and becoming a new oppression.

The protagonist of the next book will definitely be a messenger of justice, but will be more free and easy than Ji Ming, such as narrowing the scope of punishment and increasing the severity of criminal law.

In other words, it will be more "cool", this is all the wisdom of our ancestors!

[Next shortcoming: character creation]

Except for the protagonist, I haven't heard anyone say that they like any character in this book. This is too scary!

Let's not talk about anything else. I think as a second-year thorn ape, I have already put all my favorite cute points on the female characters.

So let's do a small survey here: Which character do you like most in this book, and why——

[This book may have many other advantages and disadvantages, but I can't see them from my perspective, so I won't talk about them here]

Come, write your thoughts here, I will read them all——

——Looking forward to the future——

Regarding the next book, I plan to take a break for the New Year, and then start a new book after the New Year, still with this account, still with this flavor.

However, this book is a fantasy, so I'll write a fairy tale next time, just in time to share with you my love for this subject.

I'll try to use new cups to hold the optimized old bar! I hope the result will be better than this one (praying).

Okay, there's nothing to write, so that's it. I stayed up all night to rush the manuscript, and I should rest.

——2025.1.27, at home