Chapter 468

"What the hell."

Hao Ren was completely dumbfounded when he saw the reason for the rejection.

It wasn't because the plot was bad, nor because someone had cut him off.

The problem was with the character's skills.

Yes, the skills of playing football.

The people in the Football Association thought that the football skills in Captain Tsubasa were too unscientific.

That is to say, the actions and rules designed for the characters in Captain Tsubasa made the officials in the Football Association feel that Newton's coffin could not be held down.

But it's no wonder, in his previous life, Hao Ren often felt that the actions in Captain Tsubasa could make Newton rise from his coffin.

Although Captain Tsubasa does have many advanced football skills based on reality.

But in his previous life, Takahashi Yoichi came up with super special moves and personal stunts for playing football, which no one could have estimated:

For example, the combined skill of two people kicking a ball together must be far more powerful than one person kicking a ball.

A powerful shot can kick teammates and the opponent's goalkeeper No. 6 or 7 into the goal together.

There are also people who can carry the ball to a certain level, so that they can save on transportation and walk on the ball.

But it is precisely because of these skills that many children find football quite interesting.

In his previous life, Hao Ren also liked football because of these cool-looking abilities.

It seems that although this world is more open to comics than the country in his previous life, the masters of the Football Association are still more conservative in this regard.

"Okay, I'll make some more changes."

After getting the file, Hao Ren took the manuscript back to prepare for the revision.

But for some reason, without those kicking skills that Newton was dissatisfied with, Hao Ren felt more and more uncomfortable.

I always felt that something was missing.

"No, a scientific football player is not a football player." Hao Ren pointed his index finger on the desk and began to think.

He planned to draw a new one.

Suddenly, Hao Ren's eyes lit up.

It seems that "Slam Dunk" and "Captain Tsubasa" can be slightly integrated.

It just so happens that he only remembers the general plot of these two.

It seems to be a good choice to complement the two.

In his previous life, Hao Ren had read an online article called "Fox in the Forbidden Zone". This work was about playing football, and it felt a bit similar.

He could also make a similar one.

But if he was going to make a similar one, there would be a lot of things that needed to be changed.

For example, the position of the characters.

In Slam Dunk, Captain Gorilla is a center, but in Hao Ren's opinion, Captain Gorilla in the plot is the strongest point of his strong offensive skills, so the center back and forward positions are more suitable for Captain Gorilla.

Sakuragi Hanamichi is a power forward in Slam Dunk, which is a bit difficult. In the comics, his ability to grab rebounds is quite strong, but in football, it seems that the goalkeeper is quite suitable for him, but Sakuragi Hanamichi is not just a rebounding role. Thinking about it this way, it seems that the positions of center back and center are also suitable.

Rukawa Kaede is a small forward, an offensive genius, who can score both under the basket and outside. In football, Hao Ren thinks that both center and winger are quite suitable for him.

The positions of characters like Mitsui Shou and Mugure Konobu also took shape in Hao Ren's mind.

Although the positions of football and basketball are not interchangeable, Hao Ren did not divide the football according to the positions of the characters in the previous life's slam dunk, but divided them according to the aspects that the characters in the previous life's slam dunk were good at.

Those who are good at defense are assigned to the positions that are good at defense, and those who are good at attacking and scoring are assigned to the positions that are good at attacking and scoring.

Those who are good at controlling the ball are assigned to the positions that are good at controlling the ball.

As for the goalkeeper? Add some new characters.

Hao Ren's inspiration came when he thought about it.

Of course, in addition to the positions, some other classic scenes will not change.

For example, Mitsui Shou in the next "Football Master" will still be a very good shooter, but because of a knee injury, he temporarily left football and became a decadent teenager.

Then the last classic words will also appear in the comics-'Coach, I want to play football! '

It must be said that compared with the plot of "Captain Tsubasa", Hao Ren remembered the plot of "Slam Dunk" in more detail.

Of course, Hao Ren did not include some of the more exaggerated plots after thinking over and over again.

For example, Mitsui Shou, as Hao Ren had imagined before, did not become a bad boy who fought and brawled, but became a decadent boy who did not fight and brawl, but would often bring his friends to laugh and mock those who played football.

There was no way.

After all, according to the documents, this football comic was a collaboration between the Football Association and the Education Department, which was different from the comics he had drawn in the past.

In the past, some of the comics he had drawn did have scenes of bad gangsters fighting and brawling, but that was not in collaboration with the official after all, and the official could not control him.

But this comic was customized by the official, so the official could control him, and seeing this scene of fighting and brawling, it might not be approved again!

So the less fighting and brawling, the less.

Even if it can appear, it can't be like Mitsui Shou in Slam Dunk, who led the bad group to the gymnasium with the goal of destroying the basketball team, which led to the violent incident in the basketball team.

You know, this thing is a gang fight.

So, there are many places to change.

The most important thing is——

"Wife, say hello to the Football Association, I will go to them to collect materials when the time comes."

Why was Slam Dunk so popular?

In addition to the good content of the story and the full characterization, there are two important points.

One is the drawing skills.

You should know that there is a big problem with sports comics, that is, comics are paper, flat and two-dimensional, and sports are full of various actions. If it is not an animated film, it is very difficult to present a whole exciting game with only paper media.

And Inoue Takehiko used storyboards, a lot of storyboards.

Because the storyboards with multiple camera angles will be more conducive to the reader's imagination and observation, making the people on the paper come alive, start to interact and compete, just like watching a real exciting game.

In the early comics, Inoue was still a little immature, but in the later period, the style of painting made more and more readers feel exciting.

Of course, in addition to the painting skills, it is more realistic.

Inoue is a basketball fan himself, so the basketball court, games, tactics, and character movements in his works are all very professional.

And Hao Ren also needs to ask those professionals to provide guidance in order to make this comic more professional.

Although the record of the Chinese team is a bit tragic.

But it shouldn't be that even this kind of guidance is not allowed, right?