Chapter 366 0366, Getting More and More Beautiful

"Wow, this jujube is delicious." Tang Yu took a small bite. The skin was very thin and crispy. It was just like a bag of honey. The more you chewed, the sweeter it became.

"Try the apple. It's delicious too." Yunfeng handed the sliced ​​apple to her mouth. "They are all grown by Fengzhe himself."

Tang Yu swallowed the jujube in her mouth, bit half of the apple, and said, "So sweet."

At the same time, a fragrant and refreshing smell penetrated into her heart and lungs.

Yunfeng put the remaining half into his mouth and said while eating, "There are not many left after the division. I will buy more with Fengzhe next time and let our parents try it."

Tang Yu worriedly said, "If you sign with Fengzhe, you will have to release songs and albums. Can you handle it?"

Yunfeng smiled and said, "Don't we still have you, Huijie, Dachuan and others? Besides, we don't have to copy all the songs ourselves."

Tang Yu thought about it and said, "That's right, songs can be collected."

Yunfeng didn't have many achievements in cross-border careers [singers].

Besides, he will graduate from university in a year. After graduation, he plans to activate his fourth cross-border career, which requires a cross-border career [singer] achievement of 50,000.

So, he has to calculate and plan to use it.

Tang Yu finished seven or eight dates and an apple, then stopped, "I'm so full."

Touching his stomach, he asked, "How many copies of "The King's Avatar" did you write this week?"

Yunfeng replied, "Two hundred thousand."

Tang Yu's eyes lit up and he stretched out his hand, the meaning was very clear.

As the plot progressed, "The King's Avatar" became more and more interesting.

She saved it for a week and then finished it in one day. Of course, she wanted to experience it before the readers.

Yunfeng handed her his tablet computer.

"The King's Avatar" is a rewarded resource, not a customized resource. There is no special care for uploading, so you have to code it yourself.

He spends three to four hours a day to code. At the current speed of 10,000 words per hour, he can save more than 250,000 words a week.

After a short break, I came back to my senses and saw Tang Yu leaning against me, so I adjusted my position slightly to make Tang Yu more comfortable.

Immediately, I took out my phone, opened the Xianqi FM website, and clicked into the comment section of "The King's Avatar".

"Although the plot develops slowly, it is still quite interesting overall and worth following."

"The battle mage, swordsman, ghost swordsman and other professions in "Glory" look very fun. I wonder if there will be a game."

"Under Yun's description, a small dungeon made my blood boil."

"Yeah, I was so excited that I went to "Divine Domain" to play two arenas, but I rolled back to read the novel in five minutes."

"It feels like Yun is a senior game fan. The various cooperation between the three roles of tank, treatment and output is too professional."

...

If you use the shortest few words to evaluate "The King's Avatar", it is - poisonous.

Huang Shaotian is nagging and cute, but he still has a pure heart; Lan He and Jun Moxiao love and hate each other, on the one hand they hate each other, on the other hand they are amused; Wang Jiexi is still in his prime, but for tactical needs, he sacrifices his own game style and spares no effort to train newcomers; Han Wenqing is domineering and brave, and has been holding up the banner of Tyranny for years; Zhang Xinjie is rigorous and serious, and carefully calculates tactics; Yu Wenzhou has extraordinary strategies. Although his hand speed is slow, he is still a tactical master...

It can be said that this is a group portrait novel with very vivid character details.

It did not weaken the image of the opponent in order to set off the protagonist.

However...

"The King's Avatar" also has shortcomings. It is long, too long. The whole book has 1,728 chapters, and the essence is mostly in the latter part.

That is, from the challenge to the championship.

It goes without saying that the fight against Jia Shiduo is exciting.

In the fight against Blue Rain, Wei Chen's persistence moved many people.

Playing Tyrant, Lin Jingyan's retirement, Han Wenqing's perseverance, Zhang Jiale's growth, Tyrant, as always.

Playing Samsara, thousands of words are all there - ten years, Samsara.

But.

Even at Yunfeng's daily speed of 20,000, it will take several months to reach the latter part.

The first part is not slow to heat up, but the plot makes people feel a little "routine".

Seeing the protagonist of "The King's Avatar" framed by Jia Shi to retire, fell into the Internet cafe as a network administrator, and then recruited people everywhere to return to Glory... It really looks like the "face-slapping routine" commonly used in online novels.

However.

After reading it slowly, I found that "The King's Avatar" has obvious routines, but in terms of setting, it gives people a refreshing and unconventional feeling.

Because in many cool articles, the protagonist must slowly grow up from a "novice rookie" or "ordinary person" through "opening the golden finger" and "protagonist halo", so as to bring "character development, gradually becoming more and more sharp" sense of achievement and pleasure.

But "The King's Avatar" is different. The protagonist has been a fighting god since the first chapter. The reasons why Jia Dynasty expelled him were "poor performance in the season", "lack of commercial value" and "professional twilight". They never and could not ignore his strong strength, and even feared him very much, requiring him to retire for at least one year and not return to the game.

He was invincible from the start, which is a genre that has never appeared in the online literary world of Blue Star. It is novel and interesting.

In addition, the online game "Divine Domain" is holding a world challenge recently, which has greatly increased the popularity of game e-sports novels.

In fact, readers all know that the final ending of competitive works is that the protagonist wins the championship.

Then, the objects of focus in the middle are mostly youth, friendship and hard work.

But the method of "The King's Avatar" is quite special.

The protagonist's youth, friendship and hard work are all written around "glory", with a clear and high-profile theme, no violence, no sex, no brain damage, only glory and dreams, and this kind of idealized "going all out to pursue glory and dreams" is undoubtedly easier and more lasting to move people than "dominating the world", rather than just "cool".

In the past half a month, I haven't paid much attention to the response of "The King's Avatar". I just took a look at the comment area, and the popularity and heat are not much less than "God's Tomb".

As for the results, it will definitely not be too bad.

Yunfeng was relieved, closed the Youxianqi FM website, created a new document, and started writing "The Legend of Tianpeng".

First, the outline must be done.

"Let's sort out the plot of Bajie first."

Yunfeng looked up at the ceiling and recalled slowly.

The plot of "Journey to the West":

The former Marshal Tianpeng of the heaven was demoted to the mortal world for molesting Chang'e after drinking and was mistakenly reborn as a pig.

At the wedding banquet in Gao Laozhuang, he lost his composure after drinking and showed the shape of a pig. He was expelled by the Gao family, but he still occupied Miss Gao because of his strong magic power.

When Tang Monk and his disciples passed by Gao Laozhuang, he was subdued and helped Sun Wukong to protect Tang Monk to the west.

The subversion of the plot of "God of War":

The Marshal Tianpeng, who was originally in love with Chang'e, was framed and demoted to the mortal world because he was involved in the power struggle in the heaven.

Although he was not competitive with the world, he wanted to marry and have children in Gao Laozhuang for the rest of his life, but the heaven did not stop there. He sent the talisman master to the mortal world to cast a spell, turning him and the people of Gao Laozhuang into pigs.

Finally, under the coercion and inducement of Guanyin, he had no choice but to embark on the journey to obtain scriptures.

Since it is a five-part series, the plot must be connected, so some things need to be modified, such as the love between Bajie and A Yue in "The Legend of Wukong", the love between Yang Jian and Chang'e in "The Legend of Yang Jian", and the love between Tianpeng and Chang'e in "The God of War". This must be distinguished, otherwise, it will become a dog-blood plot.

It's very simple. A Yue and Chang'e in "The Legend of Wukong" and "The God of War" are set as moon fairies, while Chang'e in "The Legend of Yang Jian" is set as the master of the Moon Palace.

Finally, I know why Dong Ge was jokingly called "unknown in his later years" by readers in the later period of "The Ruins of the Holy Land". It is very difficult to fill the pits of multiple novels together, and it is not a simple nesting doll or fusion.

However, the good thing is that Yunfeng's five-part series is a short story, each of which is only about 150,000 words.

In a blink of an eye.

The introduction has been written, a very short paragraph-I have become a pig, why are you still forcing me!

【According to rumors:

Someone has seen a pig that can only speak one sentence.

It always says: "My name is Tianpeng."

It doesn't bask in the sun, it learns from rhinoceros and looks at the moon.

When the moon comes out, it dances in the moonlight.

When the moon is not, it is as silent as a rock.

One day a hundred years later, it suddenly stopped talking,

because in these hundred years, everyone pointed at it and said: "Look, there is a pig."

From then on, there was no Tianpeng in the world, and there were no more talking pigs.

……】

Yunfeng's slender fingers were tapping quickly on the virtual keyboard, and dense texts immediately appeared on the screen.

The tap of his inspiration should not be turned off, and his thoughts were flowing out of control.

Tang Yu, who was standing next to him, focused on the tablet computer and read ten lines at a glance.

Looking at his expression, it seemed that he was completely immersed in the plot of "The King's Avatar".

The two wandered in the illusory world of novels and had long forgotten the passage of time.

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The moon gradually set in the east.

Magic City Conservatory of Music, male dormitory building.

Feng Zhe tossed and turned in bed and couldn't sleep.

After lunch in the afternoon, the conversation with Chen Cheng and the contract came to mind again.

"Yunfeng is not arrogant at all, and he is very kind. He should not cheat people in the contract."

Because most of the terms in the contract are in favor of the signatory, it can be said to be relaxed and free. Compared with the previous contracts given by music and media companies, it is simply a world of difference.

It is precisely because of this that Feng Zhe is suspicious.

However.

Thinking carefully, if Yunfeng cheated people, how could Xia Dachuan and others follow him all the time.

Moreover, the contract is clearly written in black and white, and there is no text trap at all.

"I really want to thank Tianpeng."

Without Xiao Tianpeng's recommendation to Yunfeng, there would be no chance to sing Yunfeng's songs again and sign with Yuntang Music Studio. Thinking of this, Feng Zhe picked up his mobile phone and edited a thank-you WeChat message to Xiao Tianpeng.

He came from an average family, and his academic performance was average. His only specialty was singing.

Under the repeated suggestions of his teacher, he took the art exam with a try-it attitude. Unexpectedly, he was admitted to the Shanghai Conservatory of Music. His idea was very simple. He would learn to sing well from professional teachers, and then use singing to earn enough money to change himself and his family.

But when he arrived at the Shanghai Conservatory of Music, he found that there were a lot of people with good voices and a lot of people with solid basic skills. His only specialty did not have any advantages.

However.

Feng Zhe did not give up.

Learning may not be the only way out, but learning more will also make more ways out.

Working hard is what he does every day.

Because of this, when the opportunity came, he seized it.

"Ding dong..."

The phone rang, and it was Xiao Tianpeng who responded to the WeChat message.

Feng Zhe then realized that it was already half past one in the morning, and said quickly: "I'm sorry, I disturbed your rest."

Xiao Tianpeng: "No, I'm outside. Actually, you don't need to thank me for this. With your voice, you will definitely have a place in the music world."

Feng Zhe knew what he was doing, but he didn't engage in a meaningless argument. He just said: "Anyway, thank you."

Xiao Tianpeng: "Treat me as a friend and stop saying these things. Anyway, you are right with Yunfeng."

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In a blink of an eye, the summer vacation is over and the new semester has arrived.

Yunfeng rented two more apartments, one for Feng Zhe and one for Yun Lin.

He, this younger brother, was admitted to the Shanghai Academy of Fine Arts with the first place in the Jiangsu and Zhejiang Provincial Art Examinations.

When Yunlin heard that he had a separate apartment for himself, why would he live on campus?

According to him, it is so comfortable to live alone without having to worry about disconnection from the internet and power.

"Brother, Sister Xiaoyu, don't you want to eat?" Early on Saturday morning, Yunlin did not sleep in, but got up early to go for morning exercise with Yunfeng and Tang Yu, and was now having breakfast.

"It's all for you." Yunfeng knew that Yun Lin had a big appetite, so he bought a big breakfast.

Yun Lin asked while eating: "Brother, it's already the weekend, won't sister come here?"

"Eat slowly, no one will compete with you." Yunfeng reminded, and replied: "Your sister is the vice president of the drama club. She is busy with club affairs. She should not come here until the afternoon."

"Oh." Yun Lin responded, sweeping away the breakfast on the small dining table like a whirlwind, and after clearing away the garbage, he brought his tablet computer over, "Brother, I drew ten chapters of "Little Football Captain: Elementary School" during the summer vacation. Just show it."

Yunfeng did not go home this summer vacation, but he did guide Yunlin through WeChat. But he didn't expect that he would finish ten chapters in two months.

Watched the first episode.

He raised his eyes and looked at Yun Lin and said: "The storyboards, blank space, and text are not big problems. You have gradually formed your own style. The only thing you have to talk about is your painting skills, but you have shortcomings in this aspect." It’s not something you can make up in a short period of time. After you study for a few semesters and look back at these comics, you’ll know how to make changes.”

This is absolutely true. Comparing Yunlin's "Little Football: Elementary School" with Yunfeng's "Slam Dunk", you can see the difference.

Of course, this painting style and quality can be released now, but higher requirements can not only improve quality and sales, but also improve one's own taste and pursuit.

Yun Lin accepted the guidance humbly, nodded vigorously, and said, "Brother, I will continue to work hard!"